The diary of a whimpy kid is about a boy called Gregory Heffley,he has a older brother called rodrick, Gregs mum gives him a diary (greg refers to it as a journal) Greg is scared that someone will find his diary/journal, and he was right his big brother rodrick finds his journal and threatens him to do what he wants or he will show everyone.... read the book to find out more (:
this book is one of my favorite books of all time and i highly recomend it ;)
STAR RATING: 4 STARS
EBI:you should of wrote more things about the book
ReplyDeleteWWW:you wrote good things about the frist bit about the book ;) xx
well done
this is really good i have read the book myself and what i think u should of put more detail but aother than that well done x
ReplyDeletethis comment is by Natalia xx
thats very gd what u done maybe add more detail, but the rest was good.
ReplyDeleteWWW. you gave interesting points of information which ingages the audience and makes the reader want to carry on reading the book.
ReplyDeleteEBI. took quotations from the text
well done though <3